Let me know how I can improve this short video

[KJay]

please give feedback <3

 

[Crook56]

Whats the reason behind it?

 

[Kelkschiz]

I think it is a cool little video. Some cool shots but I think it lacks story. People like to understand what they are watching, otherwise they are just random fragments.

 

[sir.penguin]

i think color grading and music choice.
it would be a big improvement to color grade