Let me know how I can improve this short video

Crook56

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Whats the reason behind it?
 

Kelkschiz

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I think it is a cool little video. Some cool shots but I think it lacks story. People like to understand what they are watching, otherwise they are just random fragments.
 

sir.penguin

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i think color grading and music choice.
it would be a big improvement to color grade