Review my first video?

[georgia grace]

take this with a grain of salt as i'm not really immersed in the gaming community, but this was an awesome first video. it definitely has an introduction feel to it, but i like the way that you incorporated introducing your channel with the actual content you plan on creating. your audio was really clear and you're very natural at giving commentary, which usually takes people a while to get right. best of luck in reaching your first 10, you're so close!

 

[Jonesie]

take this with a grain of salt as i'm not really immersed in the gaming community, but this was an awesome first video. it definitely has an introduction feel to it, but i like the way that you incorporated introducing your channel with the actual content you plan on creating. your audio was really clear and you're very natural at giving commentary, which usually takes people a while to get right. best of luck in reaching your first 10, you're so close!

Hey Georgia! Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!
-Jonesie

 

[MudanTV]

Good mic setup, it's refreshing that a beginner has a clear voice and not grumbled mic. Commentary is also well put together and condensed, not just blabbering about. I'd say you just need time. Maybe something more interesting for a video than a jumping chick illustrations here and there go a long way.

 

[Catalin CHirea]

For the first video this is pretty amaizing, I love the part with video goals,really bust your interaction

 

[Jonesie]

Good mic setup, it's refreshing that a beginner has a clear voice and not grumbled mic. Commentary is also well put together and condensed, not just blabbering about. I'd say you just need time. Maybe something more interesting for a video than a jumping chick illustrations here and there go a long way.

Hey man, thanks for your feedback!

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For the first video this is pretty amaizing, I love the part with video goals,really bust your interaction

Thanks for your response man! Thanks though for your message!

 

[Atomicred]

Watch one of your video and the first minute I realize that you are very good at commentary.

 

[Jonesie]

Watch one of your video and the first minute I realize that you are very good at commentary.

Thanks man! I appreciate your input;

 

[My Dixie ReKt]

Your commentary is good dude. No fault at all man keep it up. Im gonna subscribe dude

 

[Jonesie]

Your commentary is good dude. No fault at all man keep it up. Im gonna subscribe dude

Thanks man, I really appreciate it!

 

[Riddikore]

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