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I made this video without any preparation. Me and my friend thought we should try something new and made this. We are thinking of start making more videos like this. I'll love to have some feedback from you guys. Thanks in advance!

So this is my first video, and I know it's not great. The lack of HD kinda hurts it (This is fixed in all the following videos), and it's quiet. Still though, I would love some feedback. Any advice on how to improve my commentary, sound, etc. would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much for...