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I was born this way? haha Actually a lot of researching on the net, plus a fair amount of trial and error.
So I went back and watched your ad. It isn't a bad video, but you want to remember to "show not tell." Your ad tells them why your channel is good, but it should also be a good example. Show some good gameplay, maybe start out with a valuable quick-tip, something that will hook them visually as well. Also, not hating on the console, but Wii U is not a selling factor for most viewers. It may even scare off people in the xbox and playstation community. I would leave the console out of it completely to make your impact more broad. Also, I like the "cutting to the chase" part, but ironically you do not get to your first point until the video is half over. Start out with a quick introduction, and then a compelling reason they should sub. Try to get it in before that first 5 seconds, because that is all you are guaranteed to get (after that they can skip).
Hmm alright. I've been brainstorming and I will come up with a new ad soon, I will more than likely follow your own ad example. I think your current ad is very effective, as I remember when I was watching it I thought of how bad mine was loool. It hooks you right away, when you say, "You won't wanna miss it."
I'm striving to more or less, implicate the positive's of your ad into my own.
Regarding the WiiU though, unfortunately its the only console I currently have, and all the videos on my channel pertain to it. In fact, even my avatar, which I'm trying to make my brand, is related to WiiU and Nintendo. For this reason, I'm actually going to stick with the WiiU brand.
I've envisioned my new ad to go somewhat like this:
"What's up everybody it's bSMPlays, and don't you dare click off this ad just yet, you won't wanna miss it."
After that initial hook, I haven't worked out the specifics, but I'll mention that I upload daily content of WiiU games, and emphasize that my channel is based on Blind Let's Plays.Then I may mention a specific LPs I'm currently doing like Super Mario 3D World, and Tropical Freeze. I'll make sure to have gameplay of these games in the back.
Then to end off with a brief closing statement of, "Be sure to click on screen to go to my channel and subscribe if you like what you see."
This time, I'll make sure this ad is of utmost quality, so if it's okay with you, I was going to upload it privately first, and get it peer-reviewed (so to say) from you.
Thanks for your help Ohaple! I look forward to every one of your videos, and honestly your my Youtube mentor xD.