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SierraNelson said:
I'd love some constructive criticism, please!
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Pros:
  • Really liking the acapella xD Awesome singer
  • Trailer is amazing! Looks like you put a lot of time and effort into it
  • I love how you also act while singing; not staring at the camera while singing, giving a blank face.
Suggestions:
  • I can see a part of the green screen in some of your videos. I'm no expert but it may be because of the video camera you are recording with or it's the effect itself. I would invest for a new, higher quality camera.
  • When you do a duet with yourself, there is a line that is effecting the background and even yourself. If you have an editing software with overlays, put one clip of you on top of the other clip of you (make sure you are in the center for both), do a keyer effect on both clips, move/ position where you would like both "you"s to be and add a background.
  • I know you can act, I can tell by each video. Maybe (here and there) have an acting video of your favorite scene in a play. It would be neat
  • For your outro, try to add as much information as possible like where to follow you on twitter or facebook and your previous video
  • have an intro for your videos and put your "support me on Patreon" on your outro

You are talented and I would love to hear more from you. If you take requests, can you do "Skid Row, Little Shop of Horrors". That would be awesome :D
 
Rquerd said:
Hey there,
before I get started, I would like to make a quick reply
1. Honestly, I know a lot of people who do not have matching logos and banners. Unless if you have a rocking banner and a logo that can explain who you are then that's all that matters :)
2. That's awesome! and I totally understand
3. If your viewers like that then I can't say anything but continue to do that :)
4. That's fine, I will check out your three videos then

Okay so after I have checked out your channel and here is my pro's and cons (more like suggestions)

Pros:
  • Really awesome intro! You have to show me how you made that!
  • Awesome thumbnails, I would click on your video if I ever saw it on YouTube search.
  • Content is in HD
Suggestions
  • I understand that you said you like your videos long, however I have noticed some that some clips are unnecessary (For example: Loading screens and main menu).When starting your video, start when you are actually in gameplay so you don't have to go through the wait.
  • You would seem perfect for live streaming. You have enough subs to have an audience so I don't see why you shouldn't. and I would for sure be one of them :D
That's all I really have, everything looks great! I subbed :).
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Thanks for giving me a look, I appreciate it. I in fact got the most from you than a lot of people.
I would definitely like to show you how I made my intro. Maybe next time, when I am actually making the intro, I'll record it and explain it as I go over everything as It plays in the background, but that could be some time away. IDK though, who knows. I just need more content to make a new looking one to better describe the channel at the time. The only one my current one has that is out of place is the Far Cry 3 part, because Far Cry 3 doesn't work on my pc :/
As for starting on the main page I do that as a moment to ease into the gameplay and stuff etc, or to update subscribers on what is going on and loading screens are usually a time for me to just talk, but I will try to cut out the silent loading screens.
Again, thanks for the feedback and if you enjoyed you could stick around ;)
 
You don't know what you've started, this will suck all of your time! ;D
But as I reviewed you I'd love something in return :p
 
Rquerd said:
Here are some Pros and suggestions:

Pros:
  • intro, banner, and icon are pretty cool
  • I do like how you advertise your social media; very important
  • I do like how you dedicate a video about you saying thanks to your subs
Suggestions
  • You may not do this often but try not to skip cut scenes, even though you may not care about them, others may (depending on your audience).
  • Try to edit all the loading screens out of your videos. Those could be annoying to watch unless if you say something funny or informative.
  • When you make a new trailer, show some clips and footage of you playing games
Overall your videos are pretty neat. Nice quality and enjoyable to watch.[DOUBLEPOST=1452233632,1452232442][/DOUBLEPOST]

Pros:
  • High Quality Content
  • Pretty interesting ideas with your friends (Would you Rather)
  • It's awesome that you reply back to other's comments, even how weird they are xD
Suggestions:
  • Your trailer has music that is copyrighted. To avoid any trouble, change it to a royalty free song. Same goes with your other music (If they are copyrighted). Even though you state that the music for your intro is not yours, unless if you have permission from the owner, I wouldn't risk it.
  • If there is a point where you are missing something in your video like commentary, just don't upload it. If you have to, tell people that there won't be a video today because___ on social media; that's why they follow you, to get updates from you. It just looks unprofessional.
  • After your intro, there's a little cut off when you are giving an introduction. If you have to, wait 2 or three seconds, then start giving your intro.
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Thanks for the feedback! I will make sure to improve those. Thanks :D
 
Razz_ said:
Hit me with ya best shot brother. And lol you got a lot of ppl to review
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Here are a couple things I have noticed...

Pros:
  • Channel art and icon looks good
  • Great video quality (audio and visuals)
  • Thumbnails look amazing
Suggestions:
  • It's awesome how you make informative videos for Gamers on YouTube. However, I think you should also make game play videos as well. For one thing, Gameplay videos are a lot easier to make which means more videos can come out of your channel. Not only that, your viewers can see your true personality and some may even subscribe!
  • When you are making informative videos, make sure you have a schedule (twice a month at the least). Those type of videos are very important to most people and they would like to see more!
  • When you do fun little effects (How to make your videos upload faster; cat shooting) make sure we can hear your commentary. You can pause your commentary and let the effects run, or make sure you are loud enough to hear what you are saying.

I see true potential in your channel. Keep it up!
 
Hicksu said:
haha good luck @Rquerd xD I will make one of these threads myself! :3 to help you out! ^.^
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Haha thanks dude. Don't get me wrong, it's fun helping people out, but it can take forever![DOUBLEPOST=1452280255,1452280151][/DOUBLEPOST]From this point on, I will not be taking any more requests for now. I will open up another page later but as of right now I am only going to finish the ones that have posted before this post.[DOUBLEPOST=1452280346][/DOUBLEPOST]
UniversalDT said:
I'm new

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hey bro could u review me
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I tried to review you however you have no videos up and nothing for your channel art/icon[DOUBLEPOST=1452281722][/DOUBLEPOST]
The Black Mastadonte said:
I would love that bro. Please just reply to me one you're done. Thank you in advance.
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Here is my list of pros and suggestions:

Pros:
  • Awesome banner/channel icon
  • Thumbnails are pretty cool
  • Intro to your videos are also fun to watch
Suggestions
  • There are some scenes where one part of your commentary gets louder than other parts. To to level the volume to the same.
  • I think the titles to your videos are a bit misleading. I was watching "Mastadonte vs Sonic the Hedgehog" and I thought you were playing the game, not making a review. maybe say something like "Mastadonte reviews.....".
  • I didn't quite understand your trailer. You only had one clip of you gaming and random scene of you talking. Another thing about your trailer, I could barely hear you in some clips and like the first suggestion, some were too loud. Try lowering your background music as well .
 
I would appreciate a review. I posted last week requesting a review and no one responded. So thank you so much!
 
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