Pointers welcome!

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Hi everyone so recently I've started uploading twice a week plus I'm fiddling around with my edit strategy. I'm trying to find a balance between talking and showing during my video's. I hope you guys can enjoy this video and maybe have some pointers on what I can refine!?

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