Need some feedback

[KaziproductionsHD]

Hi there

I've recently started a series and would like to know what you think of it. Please give me honest feedback and how I could improve.

Thanks a lot

 

[Noody Creations]

It's really well edited, the only improvement I can think of is maybe having the name of the top 10 list in the video as a title card or something. I know it clearly shows it in the title of the video but there will always be someone who didn't read it or if its embedded on a website the title is easy to miss.

 

[newage]

Well edited. Maybe you need to introduce yourself or your channel and say why you're doing the top ten video?

"Hey guys, INSERT_NAME_HERE here from KaziProductions. Since the new batman versus superman movie did so well and now a new justice league movie is in the making, I think we should check out the top 10 Batman and Superman moments from the Justice League cartoon show to see how great this new movie could be!"

 

[KaziproductionsHD]

It's really well edited, the only improvement I can think of is maybe having the name of the top 10 list in the video as a title card or something. I know it clearly shows it in the title of the video but there will always be someone who didn't read it or if its embedded on a website the title is easy to miss.

So maybe after the intro I can show the title of the video? Or what place would you suggest?

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Well edited. Maybe you need to introduce yourself or your channel and say why you're doing the top ten video?

"Hey guys, INSERT_NAME_HERE here from KaziProductions. Since the new batman versus superman movie did so well and now a new justice league movie is in the making, I think we should check out the top 10 Batman and Superman moments from the Justice League cartoon show to see how great this new movie could be!"

That's actually a very good point, I will 100% take that into consideration. Thank you, I have another question, I'll be making more videos like these for example Top 10 Punches of a particular character, how do I got about starting that?

Thanks

 

[CyberunHD]

Hi there

I've recently started a series and would like to know what you think of it. Please give me honest feedback and how I could improve.

Thanks a lot

Hey KaziproductionsHD,

Really liked your idea for your new series, and great production and editing bro...keep up the good work

CyberunHD

 

[KaziproductionsHD]

Hey KaziproductionsHD,

Really liked your idea for your new series, and great production and editing bro...keep up the good work

CyberunHD

Thank you, it means a lot

 

[newage]

... I'll be making more videos like these for example Top 10 Punches of a particular character, how do I got about starting that

It's really up to you. Just need to write your intro per video in that situation. Most people who do a top 10 target something that is really a hot topic. Like for example Pokemon go is hot atm, so you do a top 10 pokemon video or something like that. That usually rakes in more viewers and subs.

 

[KaziproductionsHD]

It's really up to you. Just need to write your intro per video in that situation. Most people who do a top 10 target something that is really a hot topic. Like for example Pokemon go is hot atm, so you do a top 10 pokemon video or something like that. That usually rakes in more viewers and subs.

Thank you for your suggestion, I really appreciate it