I need advice for my channel

[regularbeardedguy]

I have only been doing Youtube videos for a little over a month and I've seen some people I've met on Youtube grow quite well. I just don't seem to have the knack. Any advice on my latest video would be appreciated. It does have language but, I was a former Marine and that's second nature when you don't think about it.

Thank everyone for their time to help out.

 

[ProjectJamesify]

Been watching your video for 20 seconds and you said "f*****g" 4 times already... That is enough for people to stop watching immediately. Just mind the cursing, it's been a problem for me as well and that's definitely something to work on

Also, what was that intro about? I really don't get it, perhaps you could actually share some info with the viewers on that in your videos to give it more of a purpose.

 

[regularbeardedguy]

Yeah, I realized if I don't have a plan with what I'm going to say I'll curse alot. I usual never have a purpose to my intros I just like random things like that.