Feedback on a New Video

[F[VI]E GUYS]

It has taken me a while to get some courage to post something but I feel like I finally had a video that was pretty decent and I want some feedback on several things.

1) Is it funny? (This is always a super awkward question) But what about it do you enjoy and what do you despise?
2) Do the sound effects and overlays seem fluent?
3) Sound quality
4) Overall video quality

Since I am cheap, I currently use a mix of Shotcut and Lightworks to edit. If anyone has another suggestion for an editing software (preferably free or super cheap) please let me know!

 

[videoeditgr]

Since I am cheap

not really.
you are just low budgeted.
Words does matter and
do make a difference

If a bigger youtuber goes with Lightworks it will be so flattering for the company
and it will be just another video of him/her without further notice.
So you are not cheap!