It has taken me a while to get some courage to post something but I feel like I finally had a video that was pretty decent and I want some feedback on several things.

1) Is it funny? (This is always a super awkward question) But what about it do you enjoy and what do you despise?
2) Do the sound effects and overlays seem fluent?
3) Sound quality
4) Overall video quality

Since I am cheap, I currently use a mix of Shotcut and Lightworks to edit. If anyone has another suggestion for an editing software (preferably free or super cheap) please let me know!