Does my video hold your attention? Is it funny?

[ThumbMuscles]

Hello everyone!

It's me again, hoping to get some every useful feedback form my favorite community once more. I had to take a couple weeks off from my upload schedule because of school and other things making my life fairly busy. I should be back to normal (three per week) uploads now!

Strengths:
Good music
Fast paced
Cut out boring bits
Engaging (?)

Weaknesses:
Too long?
More editing?

Thank you for any feedback you can provide!
Keep it real

VIDEO
Bloodbath at Airfield!

 

[piaiscool]

Aw man! You died D: I was rooting for ya. Anyway, I like the first part. I watched until that. The first impression of the video was it had kind of like a slow buildup of events, but right when I was ready to click away, the entertaining part started to happen. I have short attention span so I tend to get distracted by the recommended videos on the side of the actual video I'm watching. Lol. Just more on cutting out boring bits. You did good on it but I'd love to see you do better.

Also, I think you need to turn up your mic volume. It would make it sooo much better! turn up the mic volume and get a higher quality mic and reduce background noise.

Hope this helped