Constructive Criticism

[Ebliar-Nevo]

Would anyone mind giving me some constructive criticism for my YouTube channel? It can be literally anything at all big or small that I can edit and improve. Feel free to be as mean as possible as I really want to improve in any way that I can.

 

[Flash Cake]

I checked out your Pepperami video and the S.H.I.T #3 Wizard 101. There's a lot of moments when your background music is too loud. When choosing background music, make sure you don't use anything with lots of changes in volume. Go over the videos and make sure you can actually hear your voice before hand. Your editing also needs a little bit more polish, it feels tacky and basic.

Hope this helps.