My criticisms are just technical really. I'd suggest finding a room with better acoustics or grabbing a bunch of stuff and putting it in the room. Equally, you could buy foam panels and stick them on the wall lol. I'm saying that cause your audio is kinda echoey, it'd just be a more polished vid with better audio
Now, I have no idea about makeup cause i'm a dude, but, the editing could be tightened up a little in my opinion, there are some cuts you make where there is a large pause after and before you say something.
Other than that, you've got a fun personality, your thumbnails are pretty good so keep going as you are!