Constructive Criticism for my channel

[Vivian King]

Hello everyone, I would like for you to give me some constructive criticism so that I can improve on my channel. Just give me your honest opinion of what I need to change or continue with.

 

[SmartTheDumb]

You know those times when you see someone with way more talent than you'll ever have, so you lose all your hope? Yeah... Screw this. I quit.

 

[Vivian King]

You know those times when you see someone with way more talent than you'll ever have, so you lose all your hope? Yeah... Screw this. I quit.

Thank you so much, but don't quit. lol

 

[Pluto]

My criticisms are just technical really. I'd suggest finding a room with better acoustics or grabbing a bunch of stuff and putting it in the room. Equally, you could buy foam panels and stick them on the wall lol. I'm saying that cause your audio is kinda echoey, it'd just be a more polished vid with better audio .

Now, I have no idea about makeup cause i'm a dude, but, the editing could be tightened up a little in my opinion, there are some cuts you make where there is a large pause after and before you say something.

Other than that, you've got a fun personality, your thumbnails are pretty good so keep going as you are!

 

[Vivian King]

My criticisms are just technical really. I'd suggest finding a room with better acoustics or grabbing a bunch of stuff and putting it in the room. Equally, you could buy foam panels and stick them on the wall lol. I'm saying that cause your audio is kinda echoey, it'd just be a more polished vid with better audio .

Now, I have no idea about makeup cause i'm a dude, but, the editing could be tightened up a little in my opinion, there are some cuts you make where there is a large pause after and before you say something.

Other than that, you've got a fun personality, your thumbnails are pretty good so keep going as you are!

Thank you so much for the pointers, I have been working on my editing and I will defiantly try that foam trick!

 

[ImJustJoshinYa]

honestly.. dont change anything besides what Pluto said... you got a personality built for youtube.. you'll be getting far pretty soon.

 

[Vivian King]

honestly.. dont change anything besides what Pluto said... you got a personality built for youtube.. you'll be getting far pretty soon.

Thank you so much! I just subbed your channel Josh!

 

[ImSoLugo]

I watched your Donald trump video. I couldn't stop laughing once the interview stopped though I actually lost interest so at about 3:00 i think. I personally think your thumbnails are a little too busy but others seem to like them.
seriously though keep making videos and please please do more interviews xD

 

[Cheaty]

Wow, you definitely got a personality built for YouTube! Just continue making vids and editing will go from really good to perfect! And btw, you got a well deserved sub from me

 

[Vivian King]

I watched your Donald trump video. I couldn't stop laughing once the interview stopped though I actually lost interest so at about 3:00 i think. I personally think your thumbnails are a little too busy but others seem to like them.
seriously though keep making videos and please please do more interviews xD

Thank you, I will definitely be doing more interviews and I wont add extra statements at the end next time.[DOUBLEPOST=1484004819,1484004737][/DOUBLEPOST]

Wow, you definitely got a personality built for YouTube! Just continue making vids and editing will go from really good to perfect! And btw, you got a well deserved sub from me

Thank you so much! I will definitely be checking out your channel too!