What can I do better? Gaming/Commentary channel

[Kelly Daley]

Hello fellow Youtubers!

My name is Kelly! I have recently started making gaming videos with commentary slapped onto it. I'm new to the whole editing / multitasking scenario so I do realize there are areas that I can improve on! I'd appreciate it if anyone could stop by to my channel and tell me 1. What I'm doing right, 2. What I could do better, 3. What I shouldn't do. That would mean the woooorld to me =).

 

[Winger94]

Hi kelly. Really nice work I have to admit! I watched you latest video and nothing to complain about video and audio quality, also the end card is really good (I wish I was that good with editing <.<). Anyway I also noticed that you have a lot of self-confidence and that is amazing (remeber don't fall into cockyness u.u).
Maybe you can improve a little your SEO (tags, description and title) but you are on a good way.
Keep improving!

 

[Kelkschiz]

Hi Kelly,

You have great presence and personality on camera and it seems you also have interesting things to say. For this type of content those are definitely the two most important components, by far. There are only two things I can think of that might make your videos more appealing. The first to to create more connection between the story of the video and the footage that is shown. To give an example, it would have been cool if you had actually shown footage of the incident where people were rude to you, for instance game footage and facial expressions. The other thing that may help is to do a little more with your face-cam footage. Try to play around a little with: clothing, make-up, background, camera position, etc.

That is pretty much all I can think of.

The best of luck with your channel, I think it will be great.

PS, I would appreciate if you returned the favor by reviewing my latest video.