Review this weird water commercial vid

[DeliciousCrackers]

Hey guys, pls take time to review our latest video and nitpick if possible!!!

Thank you for your time!

(don't be afraid to be brutally honest)

 

[mysticmotel]

LMAO Alex Jones, I definitely laughed about 1:40 mins in. I would say that at the minute or so leading up to that you're not quite sure what this is about or where it's going. Consider shortening the length of the video, as I feel like viewers are kind of intimidated by "longer" length videos nowadays and won't watch all the way through.

Otherwise, I applaud your creativity and willingness to be ~weird.~ Keep It up!

 

[DeliciousCrackers]

LMAO Alex Jones, I definitely laughed about 1:40 mins in. I would say that at the minute or so leading up to that you're not quite sure what this is about or where it's going. Consider shortening the length of the video, as I feel like viewers are kind of intimidated by "longer" length videos nowadays and won't watch all the way through.

Otherwise, I applaud your creativity and willingness to be ~weird.~ Keep It up!

Thanks for the feedback and the sub!!!
we'll definitely be churning out some more weird sh*t soon!!!!