Review request

[youtubex123a]

Hi all,

Please have a look and let me know what you like/dislike.
The smallest hints can really help me out.

More videos coming soon.
Thanks.

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

looks good, some scenes feel too long, keep doing it

 

[youtubex123a]

looks good, some scenes feel too long, keep doing it

Thanks a lot for the feedback, will keep the scene duration in mind.