Review on my second animation.

OrangeJuiceHarry

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Hi, in the past few months I made an animation series called "Down With The Damned" and the second episode is my second fully fledged animation, and i need tips from fellow animators. The animations are a little based off Cyanide & Happiness.

What I use to animate: Macromedia Flash MX.

NOTE: THIS ANIMATION CONTAINS VULGAR HUMOR, SO IF YOU GET EASILY OFFENDED JUST IGNORE THIS THREAD.



 

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Maybe invest in a better microphone, as for some of it I couldn't actually make out what you were saying without replaying the same part again. This might just be my opinion though.
 
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Honestly man, i like it. I'd say keep going with monotone and dark humor animation. Only thing get a new mic, give it more theme and you'll be good to go man.
hope this helped
Best of luck to you!