Looking for some feedback on our latest video.

[Altairsfriend]

We tried something different with this video (both of us played) and are wondering if it paid off.
Also, we have been working on the audio in our videos and I think we are close to having it down.
How's the thumbnail, editing, pacing, and length? More importantly is it enjoyable?
Thanks for the feedback!

 

[iMSaiyan]

The intro could be a bit more energetic, the game audio is really quiet I can barely hear it. Try to have a good mix between the two audio and voice audio. Besides that, it isn't bad - just need to work on commentary more. Make it a bit more interesting, something about it seems a bit boring-- I can't put my finger on it though. Maybe words like oh f**k, oh s**t, Im dead, when the words are too short , I don't really compute what is going on? Not sure how to say it ahah. Hope that helped somehow.

 

[MisterJDiggidy]

Also, I think if there was some background music added it would make it more interesting but otherwise the gameplay was good

 

[Altairsfriend]

The intro could be a bit more energetic, the game audio is really quiet I can barely hear it. Try to have a good mix between the two audio and voice audio. Besides that, it isn't bad - just need to work on commentary more. Make it a bit more interesting, something about it seems a bit boring-- I can't put my finger on it though. Maybe words like oh f**k, oh s**t, Im dead, when the words are too short , I don't really compute what is going on? Not sure how to say it ahah. Hope that helped somehow.

Thanks. Will work on this![DOUBLEPOST=1469913896,1469913875][/DOUBLEPOST]

Also, I think if there was some background music added it would make it more interesting but otherwise the gameplay was good

Thanks!

 

[CarsonJudd]

We have the same name, that was my take away