Is My Commentary "Awkward"?


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I have been trying to improve commentary to flow better and have less awkward pauses.
I would love to get feedback on the commentary in this video,
And if you have time, maybe compare it to this old commentary, and see if I have improved?
Thank you
I think your good bud. Just relax and let your words flow. Keep pushing on.
The best of luck to you and your channel:up2: