How can I improve my new series

[Sammie]

My newest series is called Conservative thoughts and I am currently In the editing process of my next video for the series. What should I do to improve the quality and keep people engaged in the content. (The video is also the newest video I have uploaded to date)

Any Little bit of criticism would be gladly appreciated- Thank you

 

[vitofaber]

you should reduce the noise, i use "audacity" to reduce it when i am in process of recording.

 

[Divine Authority]

What the guy above me say. Either that put some music background so that to hinder the noise (you need to play with the audio volume so that both your voice and the music blend well). Apart from that, the rest is fine for me. Also keep your video thumbnail consistent if you can so that it would look nice when new viewer scroll through your available video