Hey! This is my second gaming video. Does it grab your attention? Does it keep it?

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Hey everyone! This is my second video ever, and I feel like it's a big improvement from my first. I worked a lot on the cinematic feel at the beginning, and the outro. Keeping it short is another critical change I made, hoping to keep the viewer engaged with faster cuts and more "juicy" clips.
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Disclaimer:
My recording software messed up so I had to use the recording which OBS made, which sounds awful. I can promise you that my mic (blue snowball) sounds better than this video on a normal day.
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• Does the video grasp your attention initially?
• Does the video retain any attention it first grasped?
• Is the content worthwhile?
• What could I change that you think would improve the quality?
• Other comments?

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