Haiku Feedback.

[N.R.Walters]

Hi all, I am working on making a series of connected Haiku videos about an invasion of skulls, and would love some feedback on the fist one so we can improve on them in future. Would love to have a discussion on how it could be improved.

Many thanks in advance, and look forward to discussing,

Nathaniel.

 

[Riddikore]

For being that short, it actually provoked a lot of interest and makes me want to see more. I like the black and white styled look and the all important sound design. Sounds were crisp, clear, and fitting for the scene. And a nice transition to reveal the skull itself. Well done