Gaming Channel: Video Editing Feedback

[Surrendead]

Hi everyone, I was hoping to get some feedback on the cuts and typography edits I made. Specifically, is the typography too fast and is it entertaining or obnoxious?

Thanks!

 

[NeonCinema]

Funniest moment was at 4:55.
An interesting video that had funny moments, but you should try to make use of more memes/song/sound effects and maybe even do a montage (of you killing or even dying).

 

[Surrendead]

Thanks for the feedback Neon! I'll definitely try and add more sfx in the next one and montage as well