Entertaining/ Funny or nah!??!

[SheepDreams]

Hi it's ya boi sheepy looking for some real deep advice. Like do my thumbnails pull you in and if you clicked on my video why? Also is the channel art popping like does it make you go woah or meh. Overall am i funny or wanna be funny lol. If you manage to sit through my videos their not bad promise..tell my why and if you left also would be great. I'm a tough cookie so if its harsh let me have it! Thanks everyone ^-^
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCl6YCMn-eakQiaEkui0T2ZQ/

 

[LeveledupGFX]

Wasnt to interested in continuing to watch the getting sued video, but it seems like your semi-viral video seems the most successful in terms of views and overall looks like it has the most potential. You should probably focus on making more like those.

 

[SheepDreams]

Wasnt to interested in continuing to watch the getting sued video, but it seems like your semi-viral video seems the most successful in terms of views and overall looks like it has the most potential. You should probably focus on making more like those.

Thanks mate

 

[KromeSmoke]

i wasn't very interested based on the quality of your voice over. Muffled and quiet its hard to hear, boost up the audio and avoid the spikes. otherwise I think you might be funny. but I can definitely tell your trying harder too. Try to talk with some more confidence and clearer. It kind of sounds like your whispering loudly. I know when I used to make commentary videos a few years ago, I was doing the same because I didn't want my parents to hear me lol. Whatever the case is for you, either let them hear you or find a place where you can talk a little louder. overall I think you have potential. theres just some cleaning up you'd have to do.

 

[Kyonite]

Watched your Far Cry video and past the sorta hard to understand commentary, I think the only problem you have is every single piece of that video was put there for you to edit something in. Whenever somebody said something, there was a meme or a montage or something. I personally enjoy when people use their commentary and gameplay as more of a crutch than the editing that they do. Other than that, you can do well! I really like your thumbnails, and that's what'll get people clicking and if they like your videos they'll stay for it

 

[SheepDreams]

i wasn't very interested based on the quality of your voice over. Muffled and quiet its hard to hear, boost up the audio and avoid the spikes. otherwise I think you might be funny. but I can definitely tell your trying harder too. Try to talk with some more confidence and clearer. It kind of sounds like your whispering loudly. I know when I used to make commentary videos a few years ago, I was doing the same because I didn't want my parents to hear me lol. Whatever the case is for you, either let them hear you or find a place where you can talk a little louder. overall I think you have potential. theres just some cleaning up you'd have to do.

My bad i was quiet sick at the time of recording but got it boss [DOUBLEPOST=1534824766,1534824713][/DOUBLEPOST]

Watched your Far Cry video and past the sorta hard to understand commentary, I think the only problem you have is every single piece of that video was put there for you to edit something in. Whenever somebody said something, there was a meme or a montage or something. I personally enjoy when people use their commentary and gameplay as more of a crutch than the editing that they do. Other than that, you can do well! I really like your thumbnails, and that's what'll get people clicking and if they like your videos they'll stay for it

Thanks mate! Just got sort of lost in making montages. Anyways appreciate the view!