Intro was a bit odd. The font and music were fine, but the walking behind some random people and watching an old man pick up trash is not really appealing. If possible I would say to wait for people to pass by first before filming. I would try to maybe plan and setup your shots prior to filming.
kind of bouncing off of what newage said, id definitely set up some better shots. find cool views, cool locations. I would say that the video was generally appealing for the first 30 seconds and then you lost me because the shots didn't interest me. I do believe the drone would help with that. Good luck!