Critique my web series trailer :)

Ernie Jo

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Feb 15, 2016
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Hey guys! So I'm currently working on Season 2 of a web series I'm doing, and I just released a Teaser Trailer for it.

We named the series Grilling a Murderer off of Making a Murderer from Netflix (we started it last year when that had just come out), and we also follow the Netflix format as far as uploading all the episodes of a season at once. So I thought for this season it'd be fun to riff of off Stranger Things, so the Teaser is heavily influenced by it.

I was wondering if you could provide some feedback about:

1. The Graphic Design
- Does it look good
- Does it capture the Stranger Things vibe while also being it's own thing
2. Music (I wrote the song in Garageband)
- Does it sound stupid or cool
- Does it capture the Stranger Things vibe
3. Overall excitement/buildup of the trailer
- Does it make you want to watch the series?
- Is it too long?

You don't have to answer all of those questions if you don't want to, but those are some general things I'm interested in. If you have any other thoughts please share! I'll be making one or two full trailers in the coming months so your feedback will help me make them better :)

Here's a link to the video: