Could You Review My Latest Video?

[AwesomeBomber]

Hi! So I've changed a few things about my videos lately, tried to change the style up a little bit, improved audio, etc. and I'm basically just looking for someone to give me 100% honest feedback on my Cities Skylines: Snowfall #1 video, that I uploaded yesterday. Let me know what you think of the editing, audio, commentary, pretty much anything that you can't point out that I could do with improving will go a long way to help me out! Oh, and also, if you could give the video a rough rating out of ten, so that I can get an idea of how much you enjoyed it (or didn't), that'd be perfect. Thanks!

 

[Luyt TV]

Hi! So I've changed a few things about my videos lately, tried to change the style up a little bit, improved audio, etc. and I'm basically just looking for someone to give me 100% honest feedback on my Cities Skylines: Snowfall #1 video, that I uploaded yesterday. Let me know what you think of the editing, audio, commentary, pretty much anything that you can't point out that I could do with improving will go a long way to help me out! Oh, and also, if you could give the video a rough rating out of ten, so that I can get an idea of how much you enjoyed it (or didn't), that'd be perfect. Thanks!

Firstly, i would love a house as an almost kind of shoutout sorry but any shoutout helps (Maybe "Luyt TV Manor")
secondly the review, okay so i did not even plan on watching the whole video but i just couldn't not see the end result and imma follow your series even closer if i get a house. your commentary is quite good as it made me laugh while not annoying me. i never seen this game being played before so it was interesting. but i was left wondering, what is the hell is the objective here? and maybe starting a new series the first priority should be explaining the game and thus it will entice new viewers to stay with your channel. also as you are going explain to us your intentions, like a painter telling a story while he is painting almost if that even makes any sense.
easy 7/10 right now. if you got like a few minutes spare you mind checking out my channel (mainly the Types of Football Fans video)

 

[AwesomeBomber]

Firstly, i would love a house as an almost kind of shoutout sorry but any shoutout helps (Maybe "Luyt TV Manor")
secondly the review, okay so i did not even plan on watching the whole video but i just couldn't not see the end result and imma follow your series even closer if i get a house. your commentary is quite good as it made me laugh while not annoying me. i never seen this game being played before so it was interesting. but i was left wondering, what is the hell is the objective here? and maybe starting a new series the first priority should be explaining the game and thus it will entice new viewers to stay with your channel. also as you are going explain to us your intentions, like a painter telling a story while he is painting almost if that even makes any sense.
easy 7/10 right now. if you got like a few minutes spare you mind checking out my channel (mainly the Types of Football Fans video)

Thanks for the feedback! I understand exactly what you mean, explaining what was going on in the game. My train of thought at the time of making this however, was that most people that'd be watching it, would know what the game is, which probably was the wrong way about it tbh. But I'll be sure to explain games more in detail at the start of series in the future, for sure. However, as much as I really appreciate the feedback, and would have been glad to have named a house after you, if the only reason you want it is for a shoutout then I'm not exactly comfortable with that, the idea there was just for fun, not to promote channels, you know? Either way, thanks for the feedback, I will definitely take it into account

 

[MOO]

OK, so the video is of good quality, including the audio and video quality. I think you need to explain what exactly it is you are doing as this isn't an as well known game (I think) for people to understand what is going on. Maybe instead of explaining what it is you feel you need to do, maybe work a bit on your humor

If you could review my most recent video, that would be great

 

[Luyt TV]

Thanks for the feedback! I understand exactly what you mean, explaining what was going on in the game. My train of thought at the time of making this however, was that most people that'd be watching it, would know what the game is, which probably was the wrong way about it tbh. But I'll be sure to explain games more in detail at the start of series in the future, for sure. However, as much as I really appreciate the feedback, and would have been glad to have named a house after you, if the only reason you want it is for a shoutout then I'm not exactly comfortable with that, the idea there was just for fun, not to promote channels, you know? Either way, thanks for the feedback, I will definitely take it into account

Sorry if it came across as me asking for a shout out, i really ain't like that my apologies. also started checking out some of your other videos and really enjoyed your "let's talk" rant on shout out Sundays. keep up the good work and once again sorry if it came off as that needy guy who wants a shout out, will better phrase my requests from now on.