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The actual video/content is solid. .. Soo here is some more technical things i would consider:
Fade music at 10sec and jump right into. 26 seconds is way too long to wait to start the discussion.
When you mention the website, "you can go here to get the maps..." immediately follow that with "so lets do that right now". Because when your viewers hear about the site they will run there soon as you give the name of the address and in this case they would get lost and confused and may never make it back to finish watching your video.
Your video content ends at 630, but your total video time is 730 (which is way too long for credits). 16 seconds max for credits. If your viewers stay through the credits then most of the time the next recmd video will be one of yours, if it's a minute long then they are going to peace out and click on something else.
Once again, those are just a few observations that i made to help. None of us on youtube are professionals so these videos don't have to be perfect. Sometimes you gotta do quick edits and sometimes you forgot things, so there is always going to be something. Your videos are solid, but i would definitely think about the beginning and end suggestions for the future, it's an easy way to get more views.
I know gamers on youtube have it the worst (since the market has become flooded and hard to be recognized) so good luck bro!
