Can you help me improve my content?

[PhysicsFreak101]

I would like a review on my newest video, I spent a lot of time with it and want to make my next even better! Feel free to be harsh with criticism, seeing as this is a new type of content that I am experimenting with! Thank You! Link : (youtube address)//watch?v=OwXEiVfZJlQ
Its called "LIGHITIGINGSTROM - Skribbl.io Funny Moments" if you can't find it.