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Just reading the feedback you've given to other people has given me a few things to think about. But when you get the chance I'd love some specific feedback on my channel and the two types of videos I'm putting out at the moment. Thanks :biggrin:
 
@Sir_Reyz

I started off with your earlier videos and was going to make a comment about your audio quality but I'm glad to see you're now using a professional condenser microphone with pop filter. It's great to see and hear how much you have improved in over a year and the more you keep doing it, the better you'll get.

One thing I have noticed is that for your introduction, you want to say your lines a lot louder than you do but I'm assuming due to others residing in the house, you can't do that. What you end up doing, which is a technique I've seen a lot of amateur content creators and voice actors do, is whisper very loudly in an attempt to give off the impression of you yelling. Word of advice - it never works. If you're going to yell, yell. Anything less just sounds absolutely ridiculous.

Branding wise you're lacking a lot of consistency and cohesiveness. Your channel header uses one design, your logo sting uses another and your thumbnail designs are all over the place. On the topic of thumbnails I will mention this - it's good to see you using photos of yourself for a majority of your Let's Play content. It's the only consistent part of your brand.

I like your logo sting so think about using that design, colour scheme and typeface as the basis of your entire brand going forward. Use it in your avatar, channel header and try your best to incorporate the colours and typeface into the thumbnails. It'll help your channel give you a nice cohesive branding and a sense of professionalism.

After a year of work you're definitely doing well. Work on the issues I've raised and you're good to go. Good luck with your channel!

@Klink I greatly appreciate it bro, it helps me out quite a lot to see someone else's thoughts on my channel! I appreciate the comments on the microphone, I knew that was one thing I needed to fix.

I do have two questions, however, if you want to answer them. You mentioned about the whole whispering thingy. I've noticed that I've been doing that in quite a ton of my videos. Is there a good way to break that chain? And yeah I have other family members in the house that I don't want to disrupt. Is there a way for me not to "whisper" but not completely disrupt my family from yelling?

And yeah, I agree with the branding part of it. I've been trying to find someone to use my logo and intro since I know it is lacking. As for the thumbnails, would it be wise to have a similar backdrop to all of my thumbnails (like the purple/blue flames like I have on my logo sting) with the title and other images (like of the game/branding for SGA/other stuff)? Like for instance, Undertale. Have a purple/blue fire in the background with the title, SGA logo, and a picture of myself in it somewhere or a picture of one of the bosses? Is that what you mean?

Again, thank you for the help! You are helping out quite a ton of people, so I greatly appreciate it. :D

-Reyz
 
@AnsellPlays

Right off the bat you need a strong visual brand. Having an avatar and thumbnails consisting of nothing but screenshots isn't doing your channel any favours. Think about logos, colours, typefaces and styles that best represents you and the content on your channel. Use it for your entire visual brand and make sure it's cohesive across the board. For thumbnails you're free to experiment with different styles per playlist/series but make sure they remain consistent with each thumbnail in that list.

I won't comment on the audio for your videos thus far as we both know it needs improvement. It's great to read that you've already purchased a new microphone as it will help you out immensely. Make sure to remember to record at least 10 seconds of room noise (microphone on, hit record, stay silent) so you can use that as a sample to cut the noise out of your final recording. You also need to be mindful of your audio mix; make sure your voice isn't drowned out by the game or that your voice recording isn't too loud that it peaks.

Good luck with your channel!


@FunkyFreshFood

For a 2 month old channel you've got some incredible production values, not to mention you're making me hungry you b*****d. :P

Obviously what you need most is an external microphone, either a shotgun or a lavalier/lapel microphone you can hide under your shirt. You can notice this with the distinct lack of bass within your voice. Which microphone is best really depends on the amount of people helping you out (your 'crew' so to speak), the kind of sound you're after (personal preference) and how much you're willing to spend.

A lavalier/lapel microphone is small and discreet that you can hide it almost anywhere and with a simple wireless kit, you can hook it straight into your camera ensuring you only need a crew of 1 (excluding you as the host). However since the lav mic is omnidirectional you'll pull in a little more background noise than other mics. This might not be a bad decision as you'll get to hear the sizzle of some of your meals.

If you have more than 1 person on your crew then a shotgun microphone and boom pole might be a better option. The shotgun microphone will only pick up what it's pointing at, so if there's a boom pole above you pointed straight down over your mouth and towards your chest, you'll get a nice head resonance sound (treble) and deeper bass vibrating from your chest.

Again, the type of sound you're after, your crew size and your budget will ultimately determine which mic is right for you. I'd recommend hiring out a few microphones to test out if such as place is available in your area. Hiring out equipment is relatively cheap and it'll give you hands on time with the mics so you can make the best informed purchasing decision for the future of your channel.

Branding wise I love it; it's simple but it's effective! Try using the font/typefaces to describe the meal within the thumbnail. What you can also try, to keep consistent with your channel header, is to split the thumbnail into thirds and have a different photo angle of the meal; one close up, one mid shot, one long shot. Feel free to experiment and see what works for you.

Overall I'm both impressed and hungry. Excellent work and good luck with your channel!


@Sir_Reyz

Unfortunately, unless you can find a way to sound proof your room, you can't yell while not disrupting your family. There is something you can do to increase the volume/bass of your vocal recording and that's to bring your microphone closer to your mouth. With the microphone positioned closer to your mouth, you get more bass in your voice, you won't have to speak as loud and even when raising your voice slightly (not to the point of yelling), you'll get a louder sound. The catch of course is that even with a pop filter, having it positioned too close to your mouth will still cause plosives and breathing to creep into your recording. It'll also mean that you're much more likely to peak your audio causing massive amounts of distortion.

In your spare time, do a few practice recordings with different microphone positions to hear which option is right for you. I can't give you an exact, perfect measurement or distance as everyones' voice has different projection qualities and sounds and more to the point, I don't know what style of sound you'd like for your videos. It's really down to personal preference.

As for breaking the chain, the best way to do it is to just talk/speak/yell as you intend to/want. A good practice is to find a time when no one is at home and do some practice recordings and vocalisations. Better still, talk with your family and see if you can organise an hour each day (after finishing studies/work) where you can let loose and record videos how you want. They might not (read: probably won't) understand the entire point of YouTube content creation but if they support you in this endeavour, I don't see why they can't work out something for you.

For your thumbnails, start by looking at your Undertale ones. Currently you have 4 videos for Undertale and each thumbnail is designed completely differently. Example, thumbnail one has a pixel/retro font with you shooting lasers out of your eyes, thumbnail two has the Undertale logo positioned too high so it's cut off by the frame and the episode number positioned on the opposite side, thumbnail three has Undertale logo in frame but the episode number is in a different colour and finally, thumbnail four has the Undertale logo stretched, no episode number is visible and you have a background and not a black solid colour.

The problem is that each of these videos belong within the same playlist, yet the thumbnails are giving the impression they don't belong at all. How you design your thumbnails is entirely up to you but you need to make sure that if they're all part of the same series, they all share a common design element.

Let's talk Undertale (since we're going with this example) - Say you have a photo of yourself in each thumbnail. Make sure the position of the photo is exactly the same throughout each thumbnail (the left hand side for instance). They can be different photos with different reactions but the position of the photo will always be on the left hand side. You could also keep a consistent background for each video of the series - the purple/blue flame you're referring to. You could also completely scrap the Undertale logo and episode sub-title all together and use a collage of screenshots from the episode itself. As long as each thumbnail in that respective series has a common design element or theme, the content within the thumbnail can change dramatically while still remaining consistent.

Another option is to scout for an artist and have them design title cards/thumbnails for you. Example of a channel that does this (looking at thumbnails specifically): https://www.youtube.com/user/ThatOneLaserClown/videos

Again, it's something you'll need to spend a weekend or two just experimenting and finding out what works best, what doesn't and what represents your channel overall.
 
@Klink
Thanks for your feedback! Glad it made you hungry - it's what I aim to do ;)
I'm currently using a shotgun mic, but as I'm a one man band it's on top of the camera and a bit far away. I think a lapel mic is in order - I'll head off to another thread to get some suggestions!
Love the idea of the split thumbnails & using my font to keep the branding consistent. Definitely going to have a play around with those ideas today.
Thanks again for your ideas and input! Really appreciated :thumbsup2:
 
@Klink

Wow, thanks bro. I'm happy that I found this thread since it's given soo much insight on things I wouldn't think about it. I guess out of all of the things that you said, the biggest takeaway that will help me out is uniformity throughout my channel through the banner, thumbnails, and everything between. It's a simple concept but I guess it wasn't my focus, so I'm going to try that out. I appreciate the help bro, it's very informative. And your advice seems to be working for others, so thanks from me and from everyone else! Keep doing your thing! :P

-Reyz
 
@ThePrimeXD

I'm noticing a lot of inconsistency with your vocal recordings. In your 'Pokemon Y' and the later portion of your 'Tomodachi Life' playthroughs your audio sounds incredibly crisp and clear, while your 'Surgeon Simulator', 'Geometry Race' and 'Swordigo' playthroughs sound incredibly cheap. If you've got a proper mic set up then I recommend you keep using it going forward. Vocal quality is an absolute must for Let's Play content.

The other major issue with your channel has to do with your branding; it's all over the place and looks really poor. You have some crudely drawn art for your avatar, channel header and thumbnails. Worse still is that you copy and paste the faces of these drawings in your thumbnails per playthrough with no signs of improvement. Last point on thumbnails - you lazily slap in text to denote episode number with no regard for how the colours blend into the background or consistency between videos (example: 'Tomodachi Life Ep 3' to 'Ep 4' changes colour). While your brand as it currently stands does look cheap, I will give you points on consistency for the most part.

Overall, your entire brand needs a massive overhaul. Start looking at fonts/typefaces, colours and styles that you feel best represents you and your channel. Use it as the core of your brand. Avoid using large 'Glow' effects around your text and if you do want to change text colours for each individual playthrough/series, choose one that stands out from the background.

You've been doing this for 2 years already which is fantastic to see and I'm glad you're still being persistent and showing improvement as you go along (specifically with microphone quality). However to a casual viewer, one would expect that after 2 years your brand would look more professional than it does now. Your visual branding is single handedly holding back your channel from gaining success so spend a weekend or two finding fonts/typefaces, sketching out logos, thumbnail designs etc. Do what ever it takes to make your channel visually appealing to look at.
 
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