I have to be honest, I didnt enjoy this one as much as your first one, well the one where you are stood there, the video just didnt have the same effect as that one and I think it would have been better if you were stood up or doing something, being sat I think the comeback part lost a lot of its potential effect, you could have used your arms as a gesture saying youre coming back if you get me, I think in rapping its best to use your arms a lot to express what youre rapping where you can. Are you any good at dancing because you could add some in there to make it more interesting to watch. I dont understand a lot of the lyrics but I am like that with most rap songs. It was alright but I think it could have been improved in those ways above.