just watched the pimpmychannel one. The ONLY thing I notice that's even REMOTELY like what you're saying, is your voice sounds just a tad bored. You could maybe sound a little more interested in what you are saying, but you still have alot going for you, perfect enunciation, no ummms, you get the point across, and for what you're doing, you don't have to sound super enthusiastic, you're not going down to Florida to vlog on the crazy happenings at spring break or anything lol. So I mean, maybe just sound a little more upbeat and interested in what you're saying, but it's by no means even remotely bad or anything. I've seen people do tutorials like that who sounded WAAAY less confident and more mumbly than you do by a LONG shot, you're doing just fine with your talking parts imo