Your attention and critisism would really help!

[ShinSlvrstv]

I always try myself in different things and I don't feel like it's the hobby I want to have. I tried dancing, drawing, singing, but I was always afraid to try out Youtube. Anyway, this time I am trying YouTube, let's see how it ends.

The video quality is pretty bad, since I was filming on my smartphone and everything is shaky. Besides the quality, I would really love to get critisism to evolve my channel. Thank you!

 

[Its Ryan]

I posted a comment with some criticism. You should check i out! Hope it helps bro

 

[ShinSlvrstv]

I posted a comment with some criticism. You should check i out! Hope it helps bro

Thank you for your cristisism! Reply you there as well. Thank you once again

 

[Its Ryan]

Thank you for your cristisism! Reply you there as well. Thank you once again

no prb

 

[ShinSlvrstv]

And what about this one? Thank you very much!

 

[ShinSlvrstv]

Bumping cause I am a bit desperate :<