Whisper Challenge - Daddy/Daughter Edition

[Ghostnova]

I played the whisper/lip reading game with my daughter and realized I'm TERRIBLE at reading lips. I'll have a job at bad lip reading for sure if this doesn't work out. Any constructive criticism you guys can give me would be much appreciated! I want to get better so let me have it, is my thumbnail good? tags? Title? Content? Lighting? Editing? Color correction? Also is this the right thread for challenge videos? anyways here's the link: Whisper Challenge