What if MARKIPLIER was Asian?

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What? He is Asian man. As for the video itself, it could use a lot more editing. It is pretty dry at times. Try cutting some of the more bland/silent parts and possibly add music to make things more interesting.
 
It seems a bit long and drawn out. There are spurts of some funny moments but it seems like some jump cuts could cut out some of those silent moments.
 
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