What do you think I can improve on?

[Atheno]

I posted a new video thinking that it would be my big break, and it had decent analytics, but it didn't blow up. Could you guys be brutally honest and give constructive criticism? Thanks! Heres the link:

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

zoom shots feel shaky, Panasonic cameras are known for their stabilization performance though gh5 is outdated & full frame is expensive, hopefully gh6 is coming out soon