For new YouTubers I gotta say you're not half bad. I actually enjoyed the video and subscribed. However, if I didn't reply to you with some criticism I wouldn't be helping. The only thing you should improve on is by being a little more enthusiastic. The commentary in your videos is fine by me, but I can tell that to many other people it may come off as boring or dull. Maybe adding more music could help? Aside from that nice videos.