[Video Review] How is my voiceover, audio and plot content, pacing for the video? Advice Welcome!

[Invest with Will West]

Looking for honest critique - what can I improve in terms of voiceover and audio and also the general plot content and pacing of the video?

Is it too fast, too slow? How bad is my accent?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ke7W8INoOw

 

[Life Things]

It was fine. Your accent was not bad, it was understandable too, so that's good.