Video feedback/ thoughts/ criticism

Elderberry

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Hello,

I am seeking some feedback on a video I have uploaded recently. I know it has been an improvement from the previous videos I uploaded but I want to know if there is anything that I should improve on the next video. Is there anything that I am doing wrong.