Symph
I'm a dude with a face and I know how to use it.
I would like some SERIOUS feedback on this. I'm still really nervous. It's hard for me because I hate drama and not only that, we have someone on this forum that knows one of Onision's closest friends, so the chances of him seeing this are growing, and I don't want to make people who support him angry with me. But at the same time, he's just done soooo many unacceptable things, and these are my legitimate feelings, so I'd love some feedback.
My biggest concerns are when I say "I kind of wish it was you" Cause it is a little extreme to imply you want to eat onision, and toward the end I mock his songs, and I make it sound like I'm saying my music is way better than his. When I was saying that I wasn't thinking of it like that, I was trying to say he doesn't seem to put EFFORT into his music, and I try really hard at mine, but I don't think it came across that way. So... serious thoughts on this are appreciated, thanks.
My biggest concerns are when I say "I kind of wish it was you" Cause it is a little extreme to imply you want to eat onision, and toward the end I mock his songs, and I make it sound like I'm saying my music is way better than his. When I was saying that I wasn't thinking of it like that, I was trying to say he doesn't seem to put EFFORT into his music, and I try really hard at mine, but I don't think it came across that way. So... serious thoughts on this are appreciated, thanks.