1) I like the intro but you have a strange green screen at the start and end of it, try to fix that.
2) The audio quality is not the best, but I understand you are live commentating so I guess you're using a headset.
3) The game volume is wayyy too high, when there's shooting/explosions I can barely hear you. This kind of ruined the video for me.
Video is fine for those who are interested in this content, thumbnail designs are a big plus keep going. For me it's too much action though, get dizzy from all this super fast movement, I only play slow games now like strategy/cityBuilder or world of warships. Also gaming is probably too competitive of a topic, I started the channel with game videos (some still there but then realized it wouldn't work out in the long run, switched channel topic/name & never looked back!