Hi!
1) I like the intro but you have a strange green screen at the start and end of it, try to fix that.
2) The audio quality is not the best, but I understand you are live commentating so I guess you're using a headset.
3) The game volume is wayyy too high, when there's shooting/explosions I can barely hear you. This kind of ruined the video for me.
The game play itself was great
Hope this helps