Looking for feedback on latest gameplay video

[pageym]

We're another Youtube channel dedicated to playing video-games while third world countries are still struggling to find clean drinking water. We're awful people.

But please check out our latest video, maybe give it a like? Its up to you but a like would be appreciated in the interest of small Youtube channels growing. That is what we want right

Thanks

Paggy

 

[iMSaiyan]

Okay the intro needs to go, no one really wants to hear a computer talk for 10 seconds... also your link isn't working. Your audio is SUPPPPPER low and needs to be fixed. Also get rid of the huge colorful texts that pops up in the middle of the screen...thats my opinion.

 

[KQ4rt]

Oh wow the intro is quite disturbing... Would rather hear your voice instead! Also can you turn your audio a bit louder? I can hardly hear it

 

[pageym]

Okay the intro needs to go, no one really wants to hear a computer talk for 10 seconds... also your link isn't working. Your audio is SUPPPPPER low and needs to be fixed. Also get rid of the huge colorful texts that pops up in the middle of the screen...thats my opinion.

Thanks for the feedback it is much appreciated.
I'm aware the audio is low, especially on my end. That is something I'm still working out and will be sorted for the next video. The text was a way of adding a bit of freshness to the video while also getting around the fact that our accents are probably hard to understand for some people. So next time, maybe I should make the text smaller and out the way of the middle of the screen? As far as the intro goes, it shows our personality and gives you an idea of the videos we make- we're not our typical channel of over-active voice overs and enthusiastic levels turned up to 11. I will speed it up even more in the next video to a few seconds so its over quickly.

Oh wow the intro is quite disturbing... Would rather hear your voice instead! Also can you turn your audio a bit louder? I can hardly hear it

Thanks for the feedback. I'll be honest the intro is supposed to be disturbing, its a way of showing what our videos are like and what our personalities are like. I will definitely sort out the audio for the next video, especially since I've just got a blue snowball microphone which should increase the quality.

Everything is a work in progress and thats why we post videos on this side Thanks for the feedback no matter how harsh

 

[ColorCommentary]

I would recommend just changing the intro to begin with. I understand what you are trying to go for, but it seems to cause annoyance (at least for me), rather than that it is something that I can laugh about. I am a sarcastic being myself, but the intro didn't work for me.

Also, the text that pops up in the screen does not add anything for me. Your commentary was okay, but you guys could try and amp it up by sounding more energetic and involved. This has to be your style, though, so if it isn't then try to appear more invested in some other way.

I hope this was in any way useful. Now I'm going to get myself another cup of coffee because I ran out #firstworldproblems