Here is my first animation... Can you please review?

[remeus]

Hi everyone;
I was making videos for kids but i bored opening surprise eggs manually on a desk
I try to learn animation in my free times and here is the first animation video of my life. My channel is an education channel for kids.
Can you please review? I will be happy for that.

 

[javacentral]

The music is alright, the animation of the eggs and other objects are ok. I feel like there is something missing though. It feels like it could have a little more to it but not sure what. The baby laughing feels a bit off but that's just me

 

[remeus]

The music is alright, the animation of the eggs and other objects are ok. I feel like there is something missing though. It feels like it could have a little more to it but not sure what. The baby laughing feels a bit off but that's just me

Thank you for your honest review @javacentral. I am feeling like you but i think kids loves baby laugh sounds like sitcoms for oldest people

Ps: It is my first video, i will learn and do the best if i listen reviews...

 

[Lightsen]

could do with the pace going up a little, and more sound effects and fun voices!
for a first animation its great though! keep working at it!

 

[javacentral]

Thank you for your honest review @javacentral. I am feeling like you but i think kids loves baby laugh sounds like sitcoms for oldest people

Ps: It is my first video, i will learn and do the best if i listen reviews...

And baby laughs are, in all honesty, pretty amusing. That's a good idea though, listen to your audience and grow from it!

 

[Trickyster]

I like it! What software do you use to make them? Also, which tutorials you followed in order to be able to make such an animation?

 

[Rotten Sandwich]

You know at first I thought this was one of those animations that would start real innocent then get real ****** real quick like Don't Hug Me I'm Scared, so I was pretty hyped at first, then I saw that it was actually a legit animation meant for kids. I was dissapointed.

Aside from that it looks like you put a lot of hard work into this and it definitely looks like a great tool to show kids. Very nice job.