My video critique:
I think when you jump cut at 0:48 to everything blended already I feel like I missed something. Because the title is DIY ice-cream, I wanted to see you spoon the ingredients into the blender (with camera pointed on that not you), then blended, then jump to 0:48 with a face shot and everything blended. Otherwise I am thinking what did you put into the blender, how much?
When you're talking about the containers around 1 min - 1:30 min mark that can be done later after you blended and are pouring it into the different containers. Describe the benefits of each container as you pour the ice-cream into them.
The "thanks, subscribe" I felt would be better at the back, as viewers would tend to click off after that, but you have cool footage after 2:30.
Bloopers are fun, but then I'm confused, is this a DIY ice-cream tutorial, or more like a VLOG? I think if you do DIY ice-cream actually how mixing the ingredients, put it into cups, mix in the fruit, stick in the freezer then cut to when you take out and give it to Pasa to eat. Save the bloopers from several videos then put them into a fun video together later down the track as a behind the scenes sort of thing.
Also smile more and be natural, I feel you were a bit tense in the video, but that gets easier the more videos you make.
Otherwise the channel banner looks good, nice graphics. Max out more tags, and add some more keywords into the first few lines of the description. You'll probably need a dozen videos, perhaps two, to start getting a little traction and some decent views, so just keep going with the videos don't worry too much about subs and views at this very early stage. When a viewer comes to the channel they want to subscribe when they see regular uploads, so just shoot videos for now.
Good luck!!
