Gaming Youtuber looking for feedback!

Bump :) Got a new video and I think my commentary is improving a lot. I got a KEM Strike (25 Kill Streak). Hope for some feedback and if I get some good feedback I won't be bumping this thread anymore :D (not that none of my feedback has been good it has all been brilliant :D) I just need to be confident that I'm doing well enough.

 
Marshyy said:
Bump :) Got a new video and I think my commentary is improving a lot. I got a KEM Strike (25 Kill Streak). Hope for some feedback and if I get some good feedback I won't be bumping this thread anymore :D (not that none of my feedback has been good it has all been brilliant :D) I just need to be confident that I'm doing well enough.

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Only things that could have made it better:
-Less ums, you improved it a lot, but there were still a few that I heard in there
-Instead of you vs bot gameplay, you could have had the AW gameplay that was released at Gamescon or some of the trailer footage so that people could connect more to what you were saying.
-Also you should try to get a pop filter for your mic, or take the cheap route and cover it with a sock (doesn't work as well, but is a good substitute until you get a pop filter)

Other than that, it was good!
 
I could only get bot gameplay because every time I tried getting anything else it would mess up. Thanks for the feedback and a pop filter as said by others is necessary so I will look into one definitely
 
I think you spoke pretty confidently for your first video, like others have pointed out don't do the um or erm, try not to stumble over your words like at the end. Try listen to your viewers/watchers requests a little to get an idea of what is trending on YouTube.
 
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