Gaming Video In Need Of Review

[DivideAndConquer]

Hey guys this is my newest video i made

what i am looking for
1. how can i edit it better?
2. how is the audio?
3. should i add more VFX?
4. would you subscribe after seeing this video?
5. would you share this video with your friends or on forms?
6. is there anyway to make the video rank better?
I work vary hard on all my videos and all i want to do is get better at it! i will take any and all the advise i can get please help me. thank you for watching and giving me your opinions on my video.

 

[Hellolabgroup]

1. it's always fun to zoom in on your face during reactions! it creates more movement that breaks up the video a little bit and keeps viewers engaged.
2. the audio is actually balanced pretty nicely. good job!
3. consider boosting your face cam colors a little bit so you stand out more
4. yes!
5. yes
6. i would just zoom in on you during the outro. majority of the screen was just empty black and it would be more engaging if you were fullscreen with the black background behind you.

Nice job overall you do a great job on continually talking the the viewer to keep them engaged. Good video!