Fortnite funny video put effort into

[TavenGaming]

I'm pretty curious how you think my first video i uploaded to youtube (with effort involved) is, i know the audio is iffy but would like feedback

Video:

Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC1YzmEfw0KoQmBq5k-a2Mog?view_as=subscriber

 

[Divine Authority]

It was okay but it better if you put some facecam there so that people can see your expression too. In my opinion it doesn't catch my interest since it a fortnite videos, that thing is over saturated. Regardless of that keep doing what is best for you and never give up.

 

[RodakTV]

So I got a couple tips, I’m by no means an expert, but here’s what’d I do.

So first off, you should clean up your title. The title you have doesn’t really capture my attention and I can’t say I would click on it if I saw it. Make it unique and catchy.

Next, you have custom thumbnails but they could also a clean up. YouTube has a lot of thumbnail tutorials that could give you an edge.

I liked the video. I’m not a fan of fortnite, so I appreciate it wasn’t just another 20+ kill montage.

I think with these tips, the quality would be on the next level.