Constructive Criticism Please!

[SuperYazz]

Hey guys! I recently started YouTube and I just posted my first video! I will be posting more and I will try to be as consistent as I can possibly be. Can you guys watch it and give me some helpful feedback? Thank you, it really means a lot. This is a Counter Strike funny moments video. If you're feedback is simply because you don't understand the game, please don't give me feedback unless it's about something other than the game! If you understand Counter Strike, please give me some tips

My first video:

 

[iMSaiyan]

I have 0 idea what your video is about, it's rather annoying to constantly be zoomed into the corner, hear a fart noise and static back out to the same thing like 4 times over.... I didn't really get the jokes that much, maybe they weren't executed that well or maybe it was some type of "inside" joke only you'd know? Not too sure - and the beginning of you dying was that supposed to be a funny intro...cause I didn't get that either.

 

[SuperYazz]

I have 0 idea what your video is about, it's rather annoying to constantly be zoomed into the corner, hear a fart noise and static back out to the same thing like 4 times over.... I didn't really get the jokes that much, maybe they weren't executed that well or maybe it was some type of "inside" joke only you'd know? Not too sure - and the beginning of you dying was that supposed to be a funny intro...cause I didn't get that either.

The beginning was a really bad fail. The video was just a montage of funny moments from a silver 1 game. I should've mentioned that to understand most parts you should be a counter strike player. But the zooming in, I'll try to stop it more. Thanks!