Constructive criticism needed!!!

JayyDaGawd

JayyDaGawd

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Hey guys!!!

I just started learning photoshop and I have created 3 logos and a channel art so far. I think they are decent for not knowing what I'm doing and not having much experience yet. I am looking for other people's opinions and looking for any help or suggestions people have. Any kind of feedback would be much appreciated!!!

Thanks in advance and hope to see if you like the designs I have made!

Click the twitter link for the channel art and new logo!
https://twitter.com/JayyDaGawd/status/907293507483783168

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Hi there. i'm a professional designer and let me tell you that your two logos are not that bad for a beginner. i'm willing to help you improve. I would change the colors and smooth the backgrounds for example. Looking forward to see more of your work mate. Cheers!
 
Mastertv said:
Hi there. i'm a professional designer and let me tell you that your two logos are not that bad for a beginner. i'm willing to help you improve. I would change the colors and smooth the backgrounds for example. Looking forward to see more of your work mate. Cheers!
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appreciate the kind words and thank you for the help!
 
I prefer the 2nd one, it has higher contrast. The first one has too many color elements that blend into the background.
 
Both are not bad but I like the second one better. The first one has a pretty "aggressive" color scheme if you know what I mean. The second one makes a much more relaxed and cool impression, because the color scheme is more is the area of cyan-blue-purple. Also, I personally would prefer a more simplistic background on the second image, but that's my taste.
 
Jetpi99 Gaming said:
Both are not bad but I like the second one better. The first one has a pretty "aggressive" color scheme if you know what I mean. The second one makes a much more relaxed and cool impression, because the color scheme is more is the area of cyan-blue-purple. Also, I personally would prefer a more simplistic background on the second image, but that's my taste.
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Thanks for the feedback![DOUBLEPOST=1505151929,1505149886][/DOUBLEPOST]
Mastertv said:
Hi there. i'm a professional designer and let me tell you that your two logos are not that bad for a beginner. i'm willing to help you improve. I would change the colors and smooth the backgrounds for example. Looking forward to see more of your work mate. Cheers!
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I would appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on a new logo I created as well as a channel art I created! I would appreciate it very much![DOUBLEPOST=1505151987][/DOUBLEPOST]
Jetpi99 Gaming said:
Both are not bad but I like the second one better. The first one has a pretty "aggressive" color scheme if you know what I mean. The second one makes a much more relaxed and cool impression, because the color scheme is more is the area of cyan-blue-purple. Also, I personally would prefer a more simplistic background on the second image, but that's my taste.
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If you could check out my new logo and my new channel art I just created and give me some feedback that would be much appreciated!
 
I don't like the colour combinations. If you look at opposing colours and stuff or your colour wheel you'll see complementary colours. These work well.
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